原文
"She'd have reformed him. You can reform a man; you can't reform a
jelly-fish, of course. Your story isn't bad--it's kind of interesting,
I'll admit. But you're too young to write a story that would be worth
while. Wait ten years."
語彙など
- reform:〜を改心させる
- jelly fish:クラゲ
- worth while:価値がある